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Thursday 28 June 2018

pacific ocean


4 comments:

  1. Nice story but you forgot to put in capital letters and full stops👍👍👍

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  2. Nice work Kauwa. I liked your writing maybe next time you can add some punctuation such as full stops and capital letters.

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  3. nice work kauwa.i like your writing just need more punction.

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  4. i like your work you need more punction

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